LazerTreks
"More fun & Less pain" that's the slogan of this game. It's quite different from traditional paintball game. You don't have pay extra money to buy more paintballs. All you need is the gun with lazar light.
It's time about winter vacation, Phoxar and I went to Taipei seeing the exibition of MoT. When we took a break, we was attractive to the post outside. Both Phoxar and I thought that was a easy game at first. However, after 10 minutes, we sweated a lot. It's really exciting. You had to run avoiding people shoting at you, and also aim the target on enemies. We had a great time this afternoon. I think it's suitable for anyone, even child and women. In addition, you can play the game even the weather is bad outside.If you interested in this game, enter the website below
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Hi Rick. Your blog is really "pimped out" as they say and is always very interesting reading, about many topics that are not so usual among my other students. I note some minor grammar errors but the content is good. I also notice there are only 14 entries from 4/23 to 6/3, four short.
In this entry, the problems are mostly with tense. The story takes place during winter break, but not all the verbs match that; also, you mention "this afternoon" when it should be "that afternoon," since it's already passed into the past. Also, you have a pair of groups: "child and women" which should both be plural. Also, ". . .you can play the game even IF the weather is bad outside. Well, it wouldn't be bad inside, right?
These are small problems. I like your writing and your grade for this period is an 87. Take care during the summer.
Chris O'Brien
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